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Original: 11/2/2009 9:34 AM
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Monday, November 02, 2009

Neu/Re-edited horror short stories

 

Scissor eye

I ended up procrastinating as usual, but I was able to reedit some of my latest short stories in time for the holiday. Sadly this is my only offering since Welcome To Tallen and Lifeless are currently in limbo due to all the work I've been piled upon from me job and class.

None the less, one story is actually neu and is the entry I submitted to two contests (which for one I sent a rough draft that was a censored shorter version) and the other is a repost if anyone remembers of an earlier horror story this year. I wouldn't mind some friendly feedback to point any more edits I need to implement to make them sheen with terror

WARNING: Some material in these works are recommended for 16+

Fresh from my WEbook collection:

Beneath It Swallows (reedited)


Disassembled Love

**Trivia: For the second tale, I decided to use GURO styled writing due to the fact it harkens back to how I originally wrote back when I was fifteen doing all those fanfics **

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I read both stories and Disassembled Love really creeps me out. Sex and severing head makes a strange mix.
Posted 10/31/2009 5:51 AM by reckless_eagle Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Happy Halloween, demented one.
Posted 10/31/2009 5:55 AM by reckless_eagle Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Happy Halloween! I'm not horror reader but I'll def check it out!
Posted 10/31/2009 7:57 AM by starrynite45 Xanga True Member - reply

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@reckless_eagle - yeah, i decided to try ero guro for this story. in this case, some people could call it 'torture porn' but i prefer guro to be the better term :yes:


@starrynite45 - thanks :sunny:

Posted 10/31/2009 12:36 PM by mr_faust - reply

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i kind of like how BIS flows way better and you got away some of the cliches that were kind of destroying some of the atmosphere in your tale

DL just freaking made me go WTF? on so many levels. totally Tweeting this sh!t :lol:
Posted 10/31/2009 12:38 PM by SuperSafe68 - reply

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O.M.G

*blargs*

good tales :eek:
Posted 10/31/2009 12:41 PM by killer9 - reply

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Happy Halloween Bro! Stay scary!
Posted 10/31/2009 11:27 PM by DarkMocca Xanga True Member - reply

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^_^

Great tales. I like DL it's gorey and cute :)

Beneath... is even better than last time and a smooth reading from start to finish. good job :goodjob:
Posted 11/1/2009 12:40 AM by DRWispureofheart Xanga True Member - reply

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Sounds like you got a great stash!
Posted 11/1/2009 5:01 PM by buckeyegirl31 Xanga True Member - reply


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